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Ballroom dancing I want to tell you about my hobby. It is ballroom dancing. I am learning it during three years. Dancing is very adorable especially dancing in pair. When you start to feel your partner and he start to fell you. I try to dancing not only by body but also by soul and heart. The best teacher of ballroom dancing in the world help me in that!

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Ballroom dancing

I want to tell you about my hobby. It is ballroom dancing. I am learning it during three years.
Dancing is very adorable especially dancing in pair. When you start to feel your partner and he start to fell you. I try to dancing not only by body but also by soul and heart.
The best teacher of ballroom dancing in the world help me in that!

Just adding to what was written above: 
The word "adorable" doesn't fit here. I'm not sure exactly what you are trying to get to: "sweet", "wonderful", "lovely"? And it would be "dancing in pairs" 

You make it sound great.
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Good morning to you beautiful girl !!! Enjoy your breakfast.. bacon and eggs, toast coffee and orange juice, mmmmmm I am as hungry as a wolf !! Nice hobby, I like to dance too, specially in my times, when I was yougner, I was the best disco dance John Travolta times, I won a lot of DANCE CONTEST you know, I was the best !!! I miss my old times. One of my favorite band are BEE GEES you know them ???? My age is the 70's you know. I love 70's hear disco music. I love to play tennis too, now Maria Sharapova the woman of your same country is one of my favorite woman tennis player, another one is my girl ANA IVANOVIC, I LOVE HER..... but ssssshhhhh, She doesn't know that.............. Olga did you knew that.............................................. THE GREAT RUSSIAN BALLERINA ANNA PAVLOVA, played poker to relax. And once CHOREOGRAPHED a dancer STRIKE durin the OCTOBER REVOLUTION !!! Olga, surname PAVLOVA IS VERY POPULAR in your country, right !!!!! What means PAVLOVA in ENGLISH ???? Olga, WHAT IS YOUR SURNAME ??? Well, dear friend HASTA LA VISTA !!! Ciao !!! See ya later ALLIGATOR !!!!! Cheers to you !!! jose ramos P. D. If you find out some mistake, please let me know, o.k. God pay you with some babies , he he he he he..............
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Ballroom dancing

I want to tell you about my hobby. It is ballroom dancing. I am have been learning it during for three years.
Dancing is very adorable, especially dancing in pair. When you start to feel your partner and he starts to fell feel you. I try to dancing dance not only by with my body but also by with my soul and my heart.
The best teacher of ballroom dancing in the world helps me in with that!

Nice job :] Only a few small mistakes.

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Wonderful !! ^^
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Ballroom dancing

I want to tell you about my hobby. It is ballroom dancing. I am learning it during for three years.
Dancing is very adorable, especially dancing in pair, when you start to feel your partner and he starts to fell feeling you. I try to dancing dance not only by body but also by soul and heart.
The best teacher of ballroom dancing in the world helps me in that!

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