wrong

corrected

italki is very nice

Since I registered the on italki, I would like to ________. 

I have written two diary entries, have a lovely people I modification, which friendly/helpful people corrected. I'm very grateful towards them 

I hope to continue talking above in my English study --> my English studies (very rarely expressed in this way)/studying English. That will help me of become familar with/ understand the English language

and make friends in --> on italki