I want a pet dog
I want a pet dog
Because, I love dogs.
They is peaplo's best friend.
I like "teddy dog" and "samoyed"
But, I think if there really have a puppy, I must be very care it .
After work, I think I will be very busy.
The dog yourself at home, will not hungry and danger
I very antinomy... But I really like the dog
What should I do?
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I want a pet dog because I love dogs.
They are is peaplo's best friends.
I like "teddy dog" and "samoyed"
But, I think if I there really have a puppy, I must really take care of my dog/him must be very care it .
After work, I think I will be very busy.
If I leave my dog alone The dog yourself at home, my dog will fell hungry and it can be dangerous will not hungry and danger.
I very antinomy (im sorry, but im not sure about this word)... But I really like a the dog
What should I do?
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I think you should not have a puppy if you're really busy :(, but if you are feeling ready to bring a puppy into your life then adopt a puppy :).
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