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Hi, I am from a small town. I never left my town till until my graduation, but throughout from the last few months I have visited a lot of (formal) of places and find have found (this must match the previous "have visited) different types of people. and They all have their own languages and culture, but English is the only language which is accepted in all countries so now i am trying my best for this. I did my studies in Commerse ("Commerce" in American English). I love to play with children and i am good in arts. I love rain too and i really feel happy to see rain. I love to walk in the rain . I love to eat choclates n and ice creams. I am not doing any job because of this problem what problem? a commonly known problem like "because of the economy"? . I have so many pets. I have two dogs, birds, fishes, a tortoise n and I have plan to buy a new puppy. I like to play with them. I like to talk with my friends and like their company too. I love gardenering too. Yesterday i purchased a cactus and it is really so beautiful. It has three flowers of red colour..It has thorns but look so nice so i put it on my dining table.


Very good! Remember your capitalization like the comment above this one says. Also, when you use periods ( . ) and commas ( , ) the space goes AFTER the period or comma. Like: I like dogs, they are amazing.

Keep up the good work!

plz correct

Hi , I am (hail) from a small town , I never went out of my town till my graduation but over the last few months I have visited lots of places. I have found different types of people and they all have their own languages and cultures. But  (However) English is the only language which is accepted in all countries. So now I am trying my best for this (to improve my English). I did my studies in Commerce and I love to play with children and I am good in arts. I love rain too and I really feel happy to see rain and love to walk in the rain . I love to eat choclates n and ice-creams. I am not doing any job because of this problem. I have so many pets - I have two dogs, birds, fishes (fish), tortoise n and have plan to buy a new puppy. I like to play with them . I like to talk with my friends and like their company too. I love gardenering too (as well). Yesterday I purchased a cactus and it is really so beautiful. It has three flowers of red colour..It has thorns but looks so nice, so I put it on my dining table.

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-- pls take care of the CAPITAL letters. Don't ignore them when you are writing something.
-- never use abbreviations like "n" or "u" or "ur" etc. in your write up.
-- try to keep the sentences as short (yet meaningful) as possible. Better to avoid too many 'and'-s or 'wh-conjunctions' (who, which ... etc)
-- take special care of punctuation marks.

** your English is quite impressive. Just keep up the flow and have fun!! ^-^