Corrections · 2
silly day
I went to update my identity card with my mother who wished to get herself a passport and endorsements of us.
We got to the document centre before the afternoon working period began.Even so,we found the queuing machines for passport business had stopped working because there had been too many people waiting.So i waited for 40 minutes to get my identity card updated while my mother asked if there was any chance of getting her passport today.Everything up to then was fine except i dropped my photo CD in the crowd.
Mother then realized she had forgotten to bring her previous passport,so we went back home for it and then return once more time.But when she finally finished her procedure,I realized that her previous passport hadn't been used.
We had wasted time because of our reckless decision but if we hadn't gone back to the document office just before the business hour ended,we might never have had a chance to get things done.
A few minor errors of tense, but generally good !!
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