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Nine Extremely Basic Sentences -- Please Correct? 一。我跳舞。I dance. 二。你消费。You consume. 三。他加。He adds. 四。她指责。She criticizes. 五。我们吃苹果。We eat apples. 六。你们炸鱼翅。You all deep fry shark fin. 七。鲨鱼爱魔术贴。The shark loves Velcro. 八。醋祝愿。The vinegar wishes. 九。巾写故事。The towel writes stories. __ Yes, some of the sentences are a bit silly, but, please, just looks at the grammar and the use of vocabulary (Is the word used correctly? Is it colloquial or archaic or formal?).

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Nine Extremely Basic Sentences -- Please Correct?

一。、我跳舞。I dance.
二、你消费。You consume.
三、他加补充。He adds. (加:plus. if you want to express "he adds more details to a conversation"use "补充"will be better)
四、她指责。She criticizes.
五、我们吃苹果。We eat apples.
六、你们炸鱼翅。You all deep fry shark fin.
七、鲨鱼爱魔术贴。The shark loves Velcro.
八、醋酸涩的祝愿。The vinegar wishes. (醋 is a n. 祝愿 is a n.  what do you mean by this?so i base on the "taste"of the vinegar gave the wishes an adj.)
九、巾写故事。The towel writes stories. (毛巾书写故事 or 书写故事的毛巾 are fine.but are there any special stories to make this sentence?because it seems a bit weird)
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Yes, some of the sentences are a bit silly, but, please, just looks at the grammar and the use of vocabulary (Is the word used correctly? Is it colloquial or archaic or formal?).

 

You use the words correctly, but seems like translating by google or some eletronic dictionary.they are neither colloquial nor archaic nor formal...but just word -to -word translation.we need some particular context to see whether you use these phrases correctly.  :)

Anyway,well done.Good luck to you~

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Nine Extremely Basic Sentences -- Please Correct?

一。我(在)跳舞。I dance.
二。你(在)消费。You consume.

**注:前两个句子在词法上是正确的 但是语法上不对 都缺少谓语

        我们一般不习惯这样表达
三。他加()。He adds. 缺少宾语
四。她指责()She criticizes. 缺少宾语
五。我们吃苹果。We eat apples.
六。你们炸鱼翅。You all deep fry shark fin.
七。鲨鱼爱魔术贴。The shark loves Velcro.
八。醋祝愿()。The vinegar wishes.缺少宾语
九。巾写故事。The towel writes stories. 巾这样表达是不正确的 毛巾 is right~
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Yes, some of the sentences are a bit silly, but, please, just looks at the grammar and the use of vocabulary (Is the word used correctly? Is it colloquial or archaic or formal?).

释: 你的句子词法结构是正确的

但是语法有误。

一般句子结构:主语+谓语+宾语+定语+状语+补语

subject+predicate+object+attribute+adverbial+complement

 

(^^♪ 继续加油哦~

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醋 醋 cù - vinegar; jealousy (in love rivalry); 祝愿 祝願 zhù yuàn - to wish. '[The] vinegar wishes.'
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Weird sentences.
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May I know what is the meaning of 醋祝愿 and 巾写故事?

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