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Yestoday i saw a movie .The movie name of 《one day》.chief actress is Anne Hathaway who is my favourite movie star.I like her eyes and i am her fans.
come to the story of the film.the end made me sad because chief actress dead when she married a man who she loved .An accident break their happiness and throw the husband in sorrow.One life only love.How long have you to wait in your life? Have to say the girl waite so long that the man come to realized she is his true love.
I do not know whether or not can i waite how long?
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Yesterday I saw a movie . The movie name of was called One Day. The chief actress is Anne Hathaway who is my favourite movie star. I like her eyes and I am her fan.
come to About the story of the film - the end made me sad because chief actress dead when she married died after she married a man whom she loved . An accident break destroys their happiness and throws the husband into sorrow . One life only love ( Love of his life ). How long have you to wait in your life? Have to say Must the girl waite so long that the before the man comes to realise she is his true love?
I do not know whether or not I can wait so long?
You have written a good review!
Real life is not like the movies..... :-)
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- say 'lead actress' instead of 'chief actress'.
- say 'plot' when you talk about the story or the events of the film.
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