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Will women be able to dominate a boardroom? An article published on a famous newspaper written by a linguistics expert who undertook an study into the speech patters of men and women, explains why women have difficult to use humour during a meeting. It has turned out they are poorer to use it to lead a boardroom because they try to use self-deprecating. The linguistic expert tried also to figure out why they try to get their colleagues on-side with self-deprecating on themselves. He claims that women traditionally haven't been part of the leadership tribe. I agreed with him indeed it's just "few years" or "few decades" women are on "same level" of men, women still have to develop the sense of humour and try to use it in right way for leading a group. So far, women used to use the humour just to get their man attention. When women will be skilled enough on it and the technique will be well assimilated, dear men they will take over on us. :) Thanks to my teacher Susan :)

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Will women be able to dominate the boardroom?

An article  written by a linguistics expert who undertook a study into the speech patterns of men and women  and which was published in a famous newspaper explains why women have difficult using humour during meetings. It turns out they are poorer at using it to lead a boardroom because they try to be self-deprecating. The linguistic expert tried also to figure out why they try to get their colleagues on-side by using self-deprecating language. He claims that women traditionally haven't been part of the leadership tribe.

I agreed with him indeed it's just "few years" or "few decades" women are on "same level" as men, women still have to develop a sense of humour and try to use it in right way to lead a group.

So far, women have used humour just to get their man's attention. When women are skilled  with it and the technique well assimilated, dear men they will overtake us. :)

Thanks to my teacher Susan :)

 

 

The first sentence needed a bit of rearrangement  to make proper sense, although I could work out what you meant. It just wasn't ordered quite correctly. I have suggested a different order, but there are many other ways it could have been written. Perhaps there are too many ideas in the one sentence - that's why it got confused.

 

Interesting thoughts......however I would beg to differ regarding your argument  that women use humour to attract a man. I would say it's the other way round!

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