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Gossip girl When I tried to find some movies to watch in the internet this evening , I thought of "Gossip girl". After I finished the first department, I found it very interesting and I love it. Because of my poor English, I can't express all my ideas about it. I decide to watch it everyday. I wish I could understant it without the Chinese captions in the near future. I believe I will.

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I wish I could understant it without the Chinese captions in the near future. I believe I will. 这句话怎么near 还 future?貌似只是in the future你是不是想说“在不久的将来”? 你也可以说是after soon 意思为不久后,典型的中国式英语啊……
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Gossip Girl

When I tried to find some drama series to watch on  the internet this evening ,   I thought of "Gossip Girl". After I finished watching the first episode,   I found it very interesting and I love it.   Because of my poor English,   I can't express all my ideas about it. I decided  to watch it everyday. I wish I could understand it without viewing the Chinese captions in the near future. I believe I can do that.
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Gossip Ggirl

When I tried to find some movies (drama series ??) to watch in (better with: on) the internet this evening , I thought of "Gossip Ggirl" [N.B. Show name, except prepositions and articles within the title, should be capitalized]. After I finished watching the first department episode, I found it very interesting and I love it. Because of my poor English, I can't express all my ideas about it. I decided to watch it everyday. I wish I could understandt it without viewing (or: referring to) the Chinese captions (or: subtitles) in the near future. I believe I will can do that.

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I do not know much about the show "Gossip Girl".  However, if it consists of a number of episodes, it may be better to be called as a drama series rather than a movie.

Overall, the composition was well written. Please keep up the good work.

Good day. / 祝 是日安好。
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Gossip girl

When I tried to find some movies to watch in/ON the internet this evening , I thought of "Gossip girl". After I finished the first department/EPISODE, I found it very interesting and I love it. Because of my poor English, I can't express all my ideas about it. I decide/DECIDED to watch it everyday. I wish I could understant it without the Chinese captions in the (near) future. I believe I will/CAN.

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