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Russian mentality Men in Russia have a specific mentality. First let's discuss Russian football team. Yesterday they lost a play with Greece. Yesterday a ball didn't fly to the Greece's goal. Russian footballers struck very often, but almost all kicks flew beside the goal. I think, it had psychological reasons. The team is always very concentrated in the plays with strong competitors, like Uruguay or Italy, but in the plays with not so much strong teams (in the journalists' opinion), as Poland or Greece (and Slovenia in 2009), they are relaxed a little. They think that a win in their pocket. Also the journalists' opinion figures a lot. All told that Russia wiil be in play-off, that Russia had good chances, that Russia was a favourite of Euro. In my opinion it is caused that Russian footballers demonstrated that game. Russia is needed play not with Czech, Poland and Greece, but they must play with Germany, Spain and France in the Group Stage. In this case they would be concentrated enough, and Russian fans would enjoy their games. And I want to say a few words about Russian men, who graduated. Most of them have no purpose of life. They want to work for receipt of money. They go every to work from 9 a.m to 6 p.m. in their offices. In the evenings they watch TV or play computer games. In Friday's evenings they drink a lot of beer, and sometimes something stronger (e.g. vodka). They are married because it is done, and a half of them are divorced. This is terrible. P.S.: I want your opinion about it. And also I would be very much obliged to you if you correct my text.

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Russian mentality

Men in Russia have a specific mentality.

First, let's discuss the Russian football team. Yesterday they lost a game with Greece. Yesterday, the ball didn't fly into Greece's goal. Russian footballers shot the ball very often, but almost their all shots flew beside the goal. I think, it had to do with psychological reasons  their mentality. The team is always very concentrated on matches with strong competitors, like Uruguay or Italy, but in their matches with less strong teams (in the journalists' opinion), such as Poland or Greece (and Slovenia in 2009), they are more relaxed. They expect a win. Also the journalists' opinion figures a lot. [I don't understand this] All told that Russia will be in the play-off, that Russia has good chances., that Russia was a favourite of Europe. In my opinion it is caused that because Russian footballers demonstrated well that game. Russia is needed needs to play not with Czech, Poland and Greece, but they must play with Germany, Spain and France in the Group Stage. In this case they would be concentrated enough, and Russian fans would enjoy their games.

And I want to say a few words about graduated Russian men, who graduated. Most of them have no purpose of life. They want to work for receipt of money. They go every day to work everyday from 9 a.m to 6 p.m. in their offices. In the evenings they watch TV or play computer games. On Friday's evenings they drink a lot of beer, and sometimes something stronger (e.g. vodka). They are married because it is done, and a half of them are divorced. This is terrible.

You write in English very well!  You just have problems with your use of conjunctions, but eventually you will get used to them.  I recommend you spend time reading news articles written in English.  Also, when you say psychological, it seems you mean to say mentality.  The word "psychological" usually implies a medical condition.  Mentality implies a state-of-mind or a mindset.

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Are you figure that thread about russian alcoholics would be interesting here? It is a local problem. For example some peoples don't use a toilet paper) And they don't talk about it on international sites. Russians makes this, I don't know for what.

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