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happy every day
苹果长得很可爱,很多人喜欢说我一笑就是苹果脸,如果不开心,会变成苦瓜脸的!所以朋友们,我们要天天开心哦!(Apple cute, a lot of people like to say I'm a smile is an apple face, if not happy, will become balsam pear face! So, my friends, we will happy every day!)
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Happy every day
An apple looks very cute, (and) a lot of people like to say my smile is just like an apple face. If (I am) not happy, it will become a balsam pear(bitter melon) face! So, (my) friends, we must be happy every day!
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Happy every day
An apple looks very cute, and a lot of people like to say my smile is just like an apple face. If not happy, it will become a balsam pear face! So, my friends, we must be happy every day!
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Happy every day
An apple looks very cute. A lot of people like to say my smile is just like an apple face. If I am not happy, it will become a bitter melon face! So, friends, we must be happy every day!
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There are, of course, many different ways to say something in any language, and changing one word can make another incorrect. All there is to do is learn and practice! Please write more entries in the future(:
happy every day
苹果长得很可爱,很多人喜欢说我一笑就是苹果脸,如果不开心,会变成苦瓜脸的!所以朋友们,我们要天天开心哦!(An apple is / looks cute, a lot of people like to say I'm a my smile is (like) an apple face, if not happy, it will become balsam pear face! So, my friends, we will be happy every day!)
If something is a 'good idea' use 'should'. e.g. It's a good idea for you to eat apples = you should eat apples.
If you're talking about a fact in the future, then you use 'will' . e.g. The train will come in 10 minutes.
If you want to show the other person that you think something will happen, but it is not a fact, you can say 'the train should come in 10 minutes'.
the difference between "the train will come in 10 minutes' and 'the train should come in 10 minutes' is that
"the train will come in 10 minutes' = a fact, no personal feelings / process of the mind
'the train should come in 10 minutes'= you 'feel' this is true
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