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My family I have a boy, he is 6 years old, a girl, she is 10 years old. They are the most precious thing in my life, i think a day when i get age, they will take care me, if i need. My wife is a other jewel that help me every single day to live with happiness. I love my family and i am sure without them i would be a emptiness

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My family

I have a boy, he is 6 years old and  a girl, she is 10 years old. They are the most precious things in my life. I think a day when I get old age, they will take care me if I need them to.  (or just - I think when I get old, they will take care of me) My wife is another jewel that helps me every single day to live with happiness. I love my family and I am sure without them I would be a emptiness empty.


good - don't forget about capitalizing the "I"

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