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the Dream of Travel I have been loving to do the curious, exciting and adventurous things. Maybe it make that I can’t endure the ordinary life. Every day I always try to do new things, study new knowledge, and seek new methods of learning. I want to learn more knowledge and become wiser, then I can explore the mystical world. But I don’t like stay lab to do research. I think it is boring and lack of freshness. I would like to observe and explore the world outside, not inside. Beautiful scenery, adventurous travel and exciting experience, broading my outlook, are my favorites. I admire the people who have rich, exciting and interesting experience. I dream that some day I will travel alone around the world and make many foreign friends.

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the Dream of Travel

I have always loved doing curious, exciting and adventurous things. Maybe it's because make that I can’t endure the ordinary life. Every day I always try to do new things, study new knowledge, and seek new methods of learning. I want to *gain more knowledge and become wiser, then I can explore the mystical world. But I don’t like to stay in the lab to do research. I think it is boring and lacks of freshness. I would like to observe and explore the world outside, not inside. Beautiful scenery, adventurous travel and exciting experience and broadening my outlook are some of my favorite things. I admire the people who have rich, exciting and interesting experiences. I dream that some day I will travel alone around the world and make many foreign friends.

*in English, the phrase "to learn knowledge" sounds awkward.

you have a very nice fluency and sound almost like a native speaker :)

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it's a very rich dream.its rewarding at least before a person die he/she should be able to see other side of the world.life is so short.extreme couture.
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The Dream of Travel

I have loved to do the curious, exciting and adventurous things. Maybe its make because that I can’t endure the ordinary life. Every day I always try to do new things, study new knowledge, and seek new methods of learning. I want to learn have more knowledge and become wiser, and then I can explore the mystical world. But I don’t like to stay in the lab to do the research. I think it is boring and it lacks freshness. I would like to observe and explore the world outside, not inside. Beautiful scenery, adventurous travel and exciting experience, broadening my outlook, are my favorites. I admire the people who have rich, exciting and interesting experience. I dream that someday I will travel alone around the world and make many foreign friends.

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It sounds good! Traveling is fun! Its very rewarding too, you get a sense of how small the world is and how get a better apreciation for it.
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Sounds like a great dream. I would love to travel too. The world is such an amazing place. ^^

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