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Tomorrow is father's day! Tomorrow is father's day. I will have sushi with my father and mother. I know a very good Japanese restaurant which is near my home. I often goes to there to have supper with my wife. But my parents aren't willing to do so. because they always afraid to spend much money for food. although I think they should change their minds. because time has changed lifestyle has changed. but they won't change. They play it with old style. whatever I just hope we will happy tomorrow.

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Tomorrow is father's day!

Tomorrow is father's day. I will have (I'm going for) sushi with my father and mother. I know a very good Japanese restaurant which is near my home. I often goes to there to have supper with my wife. B, but my parents aren't willing to do so. because they always afraid to spend much a lot of money for on food. although I think they should change their minds. because times has have changed, lifestyles has have changed. , but they won't change. They play it with old style. whatever I just hope we will be happy tomorrow.

 

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