Kevin's corrections are good. Just for fun, I will rewrite your entry in present tense. This is a way you might speak if you were talking on the phone with someone and telling them what you were doing, as you did it.

I am jogging on the street near my home tonight. It has been a very long time since I jogged, and I am feeling very tired and panting like a dog, even though I have not run very far.

I am jogging with my ipod on and listening to some songs while I jog. Motley Crue is singing, "Home Sweet Home," and I feel very sad. "You know I'm a dreamer, but my heart's gold . . ."

I think I look like a loser! I don't like my job or my life. But I have to work and spend. Hearing "Home Sweet Home," I want to . . . sorry! Change is hard.

Tonight

Tonight, I jogged in the street near my lived place.
It had been a very long time since I jogged. After I randon't jog, when I run after a while I felt tired and was panting like a dog.

 I jogged with an Ipod on. I listened to some songs while I jogged. When I heard Motley Crue sing that song "Home sweet home", I felt very sad. "You know I'm a dreamer, but my heart's gold ...."

I think I look like a loser! I don't like my job and my life. But I have to work and spend. When I heard the song "Home sweet home", I want to ... Sorry!
Change is difficult, very difficult. My life went away from my eyes and my hands. I don't want to be just a dreamer.

I saw a movie: A sad man drove his car and crashed into his garage. The radio in his car started playing a  song, "Home sweet home." The man drank alcohol and sang this song. He felt a feeling of frustration in his heart ...

“Tonight, tonight, I'm on my way, just set me free, home sweet home ....”