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Could you please answer my question? How do you decide to place the word “therefore” in your sentences? My American friend corrected this sentence. Please look the below. --At first, my father-in-law took care of my mother-in-law. It continued for a very long time. Then, about five years ago, my mother-in-law was beginning to lose her abilities. Therefore, she has been living in a nursing care home since then.-- My original sentence is “She therefore has been living….” My English teacher who is a non-native speaker taught me that you should avoid the word "therefore" at the beginning of your sentences. I am confused.

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I don't think I can answer your question, but I do have a couple of comments ...

 

In my opinion, “She therefore has been living….” is simply wrong. You should put 'therefore' either before or after 'she has'.

My version of the sentence would also have a change at the end, avoiding an awkward repetition of 'then' from the previous sentence. Also, at least in British English, a "care home" and a "nursing home" are two alternatives; you don't combine them:

"She has therefore been living in a nursing home ever since".

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Hello miltonjave, Thanks for your answer. I can use the word "therefore" at the beggining of my sentences. It is a little emphasize, though. I understood. Thank you very much.
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I love the food at this restaurant, therefore I will come back soon! Obama's policies are closer to mine than Mitt Romneys, therefore I will vote for Obama. It will be very hot tomorrow, therefore I will make sure I bring plenty of water with me. therefore=so therefore=as a result

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