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My Peking Opera Photos I am fond of Peking Opera since my childhood.In my opinion,it is an opera of deep mystery and enchantment.It is a pity that I didn't choose this major,but I will be an ardent fan of Peking Opera in the future. The other day,I took pictures in a very good photographic studio in Beijing.I quite like its style:gorgeous and enchanting.So when I see the photos,I feel better about my half-baked dream.

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My Peking Opera Photos

I have been fond of Peking Opera since my childhood. In my opinion, it is an opera of deep mystery and enchantment. It is a pity that I didn't choose this (as) major, but I will be an ardent fan of Peking Opera in the future. The other day, I took pictures in a very good photographic studio in Beijing. I quite liked its style, gorgeous and enchanting. So when I see the photos, I feel better about my half-baked dream.

- it should be 'liked' not 'like'. Oops!!^^

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Ahh!! You look very pretty in your colorful costume and immaculate make up. The make over looks so real. Wonderful!! I heard about famous Peking Opera, never had time to dig deep into its history though. Would definitely love to hear more about it from you. Cheers!!
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My Peking Opera Photos

I have been fond of Peking Opera since my childhood. In my opinion, it is an opera of deep mystery and enchantment. It is a pity that I didn't choose this major, but I will be an ardent fan of Peking Opera in the future. The other day, I took pictures in a very good photographic studio in Beijing. I quite like its style, gorgeous and enchanting. So when I see the photos, I feel better about my half-baked dream.

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*  Nice little composition. Very good. Keep it up!

- ‘since’ is always used with the Perfect or Perfect Progressive (Perfect Continuous) tense.

- leave a gap (space) after the punctuation marks.

For example: “I did it. He saw it” ….

Here notice the space between “.”(stop) and “He”. The rule is the same for all other punctuation marks as well.

- to know more about the use of "since" plz check the following link:
  http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/since


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