A feeling

It's like you're screaming, and no one can hear!
You almost feel ashamed that someone could be that important to you.
And that without that someone, you feel hopeless, like nothing can save you!
It's kind of hard to understand...but it's how I feel about you :)!

Very well done. This is excellent English.

One comment...good English writing uses very few exclamation points (!). Use periods instead, and use an exclamation point only rarely.