I want to go abroad. I want to go abroad . I'm thinking to go Australia because my friend is there . Omg.what should I write here?=( Can I use this as a diary?

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I want to go abroad.

I want to go abroad .
I'm thinking (or "planning", "i have plans") to go to (or "of going to) Australia because my friend is there (or "i have friend who lives there", "a friend of mine lives there").
Omg! what should I write here? =(
Can I use this as a diary?

well, a notebook entry, i think should be your notebook where you can write your thoughts and letting someone to correct it. That will benefit our learning! the best way to enjoy learning a foreing language is to translate our thoughts (compared to memorizing all the vocabulary) :) よくできたね!

I think "because my friend is there" is technically correct, but it sounds weird to me. I would say either "because my friend lives there" as I put in the correction or "because I have a friend there." The latter would be more appropriate if for some reason your friend is in the country but doesn't live there (long vacation maybe?).

I want to go abroad.

I want to go abroad.
I'm thinking of going to Australia because my friend is lives there.
Omg.what should I write here?=(
Can I use this as a diary?

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