a hot day!
35℃ in nanjing today!
The library air conditioner is cool,when I study in it,even felt a little cold! But when I out of the library,oh,so hot!I feel I am going to be roasted,I hate summer!
italki is a interesting place, I have make many friends by it,yesterday I talk with a boy by msn,haha ,he said that he is a handsome boy(but in fact...I don't know,and I hope it is true!haha,I like handsome boy!),and a other friend,we are chatting on QQ now ,I like italki,and I hope I can make more friends through it.
and the English test next week is still really a tangle of thing! God ,save me!
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a hot day!
35℃ in nanjing today!
The library's air conditioning is cool when I sit there to study,even felt a little cold! But when I go out,oh,so hot!I feel that I am going to be roasted,I hate summer!
italki is a interesting place, I have made many friends through it,yesterday I talked with a boy by msn,haha ,he said that he was a handsome boy(but in fact...I don't know,and I hope it is true!haha,I like handsome boy!),and a other friend,we was chatting on QQ now ,I like italki,and I hope I can make more friends through it.
and the English test next week is still really a tangle of thing! God ,save me!
I think that you should use tenses more clearly. if something happened in the past, you should use past tense. but the overall I think your writing is quite good! let practicec more, it'll be better :D
also, Nice to meet you, I am lin from Viet Nam.
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need to work hard, when u write about some past experience, try to write it in past tense,,
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