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I am so glad to make some friends from western country where i want to live in even born in . If that can come true ,i will be different with myself now.i will be confident ,maybe getting well with my parents especially my dad,i have so freedom to do whatever i want.
My mom always want me to find a job related with medicine because i can make a living with it and the work is not so busy .but i really really hate it ! i can not concentrate my mind on the class and so bored. I want to be a vet in the future.In china there are so many homeless animals along the road or apartment,i am so sad when i saw them and most of them is sick.I want to try my best to save their lives, working hard is ok for me . I hope that my life will be meaningful.But there are some problems in my life to come true .
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I am so glad to make some friends from western country where i want to live in even born in . If that can come true ,i will be different with myself now.i will be confident ,maybe getting well with my parents especially my dad,i have so freedom to do whatever i want.
I am so glad that I am able to make some friends who come from Western countries. I want to live in Western countries, and wish I was born in a Western country. If I could live in a Western country, I would different that whom I am right now. I would be more confident and maybe even get along with my parents, especially my dad because I would have the freedom to do whatever I want.
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你为什么要住在西方国家? 中国不错
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I do not understand. If you do not like medicine then being a vet is not so good.
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谢谢你,你也很善良~
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Your idea is very good,we are loving,four months ago,i just adopt a dog.let us do their own love to save them.
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