House

I don't know every people think what about your house, for me, I love my house so much
Today i'm going to tell you somethings about my house. It's an old house that was built about 10 years ago. My parents built it by their saved money. When you visit my house, the first thing you will see is a medium living room. It's decorated with the light color and some beautiful pictures on the wall. There're 3 bed rooms in my houses. There're one livingroom, kitchen and the toilet.
I really love sister bedroom because she decorate it by my self with pink walls, sister cute bed, a warddrobe and a lovely dressing table
The kitchen in my house is not big and modern but my mother is very like it because where is my mother make a lot of delicious and special dishes for my family.
Every night, my family watch TV toghether in living room. We talk about everything, and I think it's the best time we have together.

Chao Ban,

You can phrase it: I don't know what other people think about their houses, but for me, I love my house so much.  (Your house is old at 10 years!  Our house is 150 years old). 

You should say: a light color

3 bedrooms in my house (I think you only have one house)

There is one livingroom, a kitchen and a toilet.

I love my sister's bedroom because she decorated it by herself with pink walls.  She has a cute bed, a wardrobe and a dressing table.

but my mother likes it very much because my mother makes

My family watches

Milton

House

I don't know every people think what about your house, for me, I love my house so much
Today i'm going to tell you somthings about my house. It's an old house that was built about 10 years ago. My parents built it by their save money. When you visit my house, the first thing you will see is a medium living room. It's decorated with the light color and some beautiful pictures on the wall. There're 3 bed rooms in my houses. There're one livingroom, kitchen and the toilet.
I really love sister bedroom because she decorate it by my self with pink walls, sister cute bed, a warddrobe and a lovely dressing table
The kitchen in my house is not big and modern but my mother is very like it because where is my mother make a lot of delicious and special dishes for my family.
Every night, my family watch TV toghether in living room. We talk about everything, and I think it's the best time we have together.