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As A Teenager.. It's been a long time since I posted my latest note. Today I just want to write about me as a teenager. When I'm in puberty phase, I always want to do something new. Something I've never do before. But I always control it so it never plunge me to negative things. By the way, i just finished my study in Junior High School and will be an High School student in the middle of July. I always think about that. I will find new teachers, new friends, everything. And I feel a little worry about it. I just hope there's nothing bad will be happen to me. That's all XD

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As A Teenager..

It's been a long time since I posted my latest last note. Today I just want to write about me as a teenager. When While I'm in puberty phase going through puberty, I always want to do something new. Something I've never done before. But I always control it so it never plunges me into negative things. (But I always control my desires, so they never get me in trouble.)
By the way, i just finished my study in Junior High School and will be an High School student in the middle of July (and I will start High School in the middle of July). I always think about that. I will find new teachers, new friends, everything. And I feel a little worried about it. I just hope there's nothing bad will be happen to me. That's all XD

 

Well written.  Your English is quite good for someone so young. I use red is for correcting mistakes. Blue is for suggestions - meaning what you wrote is correct English, but what I wrote in blue is more natural (lebih enak gitu). Tapi gue kira bahwa "always control my desires" gitu, sedikit bohong kan? Ngga ada orang sempurna terutama sambil masa pubertas. :P

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You gotta use english more to improve :) i can help you if you wish :) add me on skype-sash.alex91 no voice/video . . . I don't have time for those and i don't do voice/video unless i know the person for a very long time. But you can type chat :) it'll help your writing skills :)
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Err... sorry. I know my english really bad. -_-"
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*thanks for correcting it :p you really need to go to the english village patricia adik:p
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thanks for corrected it :D

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