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My lovely grand mother. My grand mother,she have 76 years old,98kg.she leave near the mountain kilimanjaro at moshi village.i love her so much like her love me.My grand mother she is one who believe God and against globalization.she does not went market because of high weight but grand grand mother she can went market 3km from home and she went by foot.she have 102 years old and 78kg.i like to be like my grand grand mother because she very very mode and high older.my grand mother is too fat she can go any way more than are own farmer and church which is 1/2 km from home.2010 in apr is sadness day which my grand grand other dead never forget her in my life.my grand mother she hate people who are laze,she not like to live in town because she sad all people who live in town is laze and destroy are culture this because more disease is increase in town?she told me people in town she/he she does not work,they wake up 08:00,they wash dishes and clothes,and cleaner the house no other job?they set all time to watch Tv and read magazine.she act like the people who smart all time and be clean but every day spread of disease is increase like malaria,diarrhea and vomit ten.my grand mother every Friday and Sunday want church aery is the morning. every which remain early is morn went on farm since morn up 14 afternoon.my grand mother hate all people who use cosmetic because they correct SIR GOD, sir God make as like him.she told me every thing which done in this wold us against of God this because every day disease increase in this wold this punishment of GOD.because of disease increase like HIV AND GLOB WARMING.AND NOW HOMOSEXUAL.I LOVE SO MUCH MY GRAND MOTHER BECAUSE HE TEACH MORE EVERY THING IN MY LIFE ESPECIAL CULTURE.

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My lovely grand mother.

My grand mother she have 76 years old,98kg is 76 years old and weights 98kgs. She leave lives near the mountain kilimanjaro at moshi village. I love her so much like her love she loves me.My grand mother she is a one who believes on God and she is against globalization. She does not went go to market because of her high weight but grand grand her mother she can went goes to market 3km from home and she went by foot walks to it. She have is 102 years old and weitghts 78kg. I like to be like my grand grand mothers mother because she very very mode and high very older. My grand mother is too fat so she can not go any way more than are own farmer her own farm and church which is 1/2 km from home. 2010 in apr is sadness day which my grand grand other dead never forget her in my life. In a sad day in year 2010 my grandmother passed away. I never forget her in my life. My grand mother she hate people who are laze, lazy. She did not like to live in town because she sad said all people who lives in town is are laze lazy and destroy are our culture. This is why because more diseases is increase are in town.? She told me that people in town she/he she does not work. they wake up 08:00,they wash dishes and clothes,and cleaner the house no other job? They wake up at 08.00am, wash dishes, cloths and clean the house without doing any other job. They set spend all time to watch Tv and read magazines. she act like the people who smart all time They act like they are smarter than others all the time and be clean but every day the spread of diseases is increased like malaria,diarrhea and vomit ten. My grand mother went to church every Friday and Sunday morning want church aery is the morning. every which remain early is morn went on farm since morn up 14 afternoon. My grand mother hated all the people who use cosmetic because they correct SIR GOD, sir God make as like him go against the God since the God make us as he like. She told me that every thing which has happned to done in this wold us against of God this because every day disease increase in this wold this punishment of GOD like increased deseases, HIV, global warming and now homosexual are punishments of God because we go againt him. because of disease increase like HIV AND GLOB WARMING.AND NOW HOMOSEXUAL. I LOVE SO MUCH MY GRAND MOTHER BECAUSE HE TEACH MORE EVERY THING IN MY LIFE ESPECIAL CULTURE SHE TAUGHT ME LOT OF THINGS SPECIALLY ABOUT MY CULTURE . 

 

Hey Jackline, my correction may still contain mistakes and if so, please forgive me. I tried my best to make it correct.

 

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