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no topic With the technology develop, communicate with each other become more and more convenient, people can use modern technology tools to communicate, such as mobile, phone, Internet. Nowadays, many people prefer surfing the Internet and chatting online, especially young people. So they can conveniently and timely communicate with their friends or strangers. By the way, using the Internet to communicate with others is free. I like chatting online, I have MSN ID, Skype ID, QQ ID. In my mind, possessing these IM tools is fashionable and useful. I use it to communicate with my friends. I like surfing the Internet too. I often look through news, look up information, and learn English on the Internet. Recently, I found a good website for learning foreign language, it is italki.com. I knew some foreign friends who can help me learn English. Their mother tongue is English, so I can ask them when I have problems of learning English. Meanwhile, I can help someone who want to learn Chinese. I thank italki and foreign friends who helped me.

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With the  development of technology develop, communication with each other has become more and more convenient.  People can use modern technology tools to communicate, such as mobile phones / cellphones, phones, (and) the Internet.  Nowadays, many people prefer surfing the Internet and chatting online, especially young people.  So They can  communicate conveniently and timely quickly communicate with their friends or strangers.  By the way, using the Internet to communicate with others is free.  I like chatting online; I have an MSN ID, Skype ID, and QQ ID.  In my mind, possessing these IM tools is fashionable and useful.  I use it to communicate with my friends.  I like surfing the Internet too.  I often look through news, look up information, and learn English on the Internet.  Recently, I found a good website for learning a foreign language, it is italki.com.  I knew met / made some foreign friends who can help me learn English.  Their mother tongue is English, so I can ask them (questions) when I have problems of learning English.  Meanwhile, I can help someone who wants to learn Chinese.  I thank italki and my foreign friends who have helped me.  [OR:  I thank italki and my foreign friends for helping me.]

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