Exercise 2

I was really surprised when I saw my old school friend appearing on TV. I knew he always wanted to becomes a star, but I never thought that he might to get it to be one. Since we get got the our degrees in philosophy I’ve never don't heard from him. It seems he went to find fortune to in the USA. Nowadays he’s a famous actor in Hollywood. I don’t like very much movies very much, so I didn’t realise his successfully career  before until he was in the theatre, and then in cinema. Now I have a problem. My daughter wants to become a star too. She loves the my old friend's movies from my old friend. As soon as she found out about my old relationship with my friend, she asked me that if I would introduce her to him. However, I’m afraid he doesn’t remember me any longer. Finally, my daughter is angry because I haven’t called phone him yet.

It seems you are forgetting prepositions that are essential in understanding the sentences. Also, remember that in English we use possessives differently, meaning that you do not say "the movies from my old friend" or "the movies of my old friend". We would say "my old friend's movies". Keep up the good work! 

Exercise 2

I was really surprised when I saw my old school friend appearing on TV. I knew he always wanted to becomes a star, but I never thought that he might make it. Since we earned our degrees in philosophy, I’ve not heard from him. It seems he went to find fortune in the USA. Nowadays he’s a famous actor in Hollywood. I don’t like movies very much, so I didn’t realise how successfully is his career, first in theatre and then (later) in cinema. Now, I have a problem. My daughter wants to become a star too. She loves the movies from (of) my old friend. As soon as she found out my old relationship with my friend, she asked me to I introduce her to him. However, I’m afraid he doesn’t remember me longer. Finally, my daughter is angry because I haven’t called phone him yet.