Muslim

Muslim man just like any other people, but differs from them in the faith,

A Muslim man is just like any other man, but differs from others in faith.

Grammer: Man is singular, so you have to say ".. man is"

else you can write "Muslim men ARE like other men"

he acknowledges the existence of God and recognize his abilities and with Muhammad.

He also belives that Muhammad is a Muslim role model for everyone and everyone loves him and is considered also as a teacher to us. This is the difference between the Muslim and the rest of the people

Good job sister. It would be better if you split your essay in to smaller sentences. The meaning would be more clear then.

Muslims are just like any other people, but they differ from others in their faith. They acknowledge the existence of God and recognize his abilities. Muslims also believe that Mohamed (SAW) is the role model for mankind, especially for Muslims. All Muslims love him and they consider him as a teacher. This is the difference between Muslims and the rest of mankind.