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Solar Eclipse I was very lucky today, because I saw a solar eclipse. A few days ago, I bought special glasses. When I woke up this morning, it was cloudy, so I couldn’t see the sun. However, fortunately the clouds moved and the sun appeared. I was excited and I was praying “please any clouds don’t hide the sun.” I think it was a few minutes before seven o’clock in the morning, outside gradually became a little dark and the wind became slightly strong. When I woke up I had felt it was hotter than yesterday, but I felt a little bit cold when outside became dark. I realized that the sun’s energy was reduced by the moon. I saw the sun. It disappeared very little part from upper right side. It was about seven twenty seven. I saw the beautiful solar eclipse! The shape was not perfect, but it was almost a ring! It was so beautiful. I was so impressed. The solar eclipse happens only once in 300 years. It was very lucky, because I’m living in here and I had the chance, moreover, the weather was not bad. Besides, it became cloudy after few minutes. What a very lucky I was! I’ll never forget the beautiful solar eclipse.

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Solar Eclipse

I was very lucky today, because I saw a solar eclipse.
A few days ago, I bought special glasses. When I woke up this morning, it was cloudy, so I couldn’t see the sun. Fortunately, however, the clouds moved and the sun appeared. I was excited and I was praying “please any clouds, don’t hide the sun.”
I think it was a few minutes before seven o’clock in the morning, when outside it gradually became a little dark outside and the wind became slightly stronger. When I woke up I had felt it was hotter than yesterday, but I felt a little bit cold when outside it became dark outside. I realized that the sun’s energy was reduced by the moon. I saw the sun. A very small part from upper right side had disappeared.
It was about 7.27. I saw the beautiful solar eclipse! The shape was not perfect, but it was almost a ring! It was so beautiful. I was so impressed.
This type of solar eclipse happens only once in 300 years. It was very lucky, because I’m living in here and I had the opportunity. Moreover, the weather was not bad.
Besides, it became cloudy after few minutes. What a very lucky person I was!
I’ll never forget the beautiful solar eclipse.

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Hello Susan, I was so happy to see the beautiful solar eclipse, so I wanted to leave my feeling.^^ Thank you for reading my journal!!
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Thank you! I was hoping someone would write about that.

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