First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi!
My name is Young - Min Han.

I'm from Korea.

Now is I am/live in Canada. 

I want to learn English. 

I have want to have / make a good friend.

I'm interested in music.

And I like movies. 

I want to be your friend friendship. (friendship is the relationship between friends.) 

Have a nice day.

Good job!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi
My name is Young - Min Han

I'm from Korea.

now is I live in Canada.

I want to learn English.

I have want to have a good friend.

I'm interested in music.

and I like movies

I want to be your friendship.

have a nice day.

^___^

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi! 
My name is Young - Min Han

I'm from Korea.

I am now is in Canada.

I want to learn English.

I have want good friends.

I'm interested in music, 

and I like movies. 

I want to be your friendship.

Have a nice day!

~ Well you did a great job! ^^ Hope you can keep learning English because you are really good! Fighting! (: xo Rosaliaa!