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A letter to some one who is trying to design and build up some training program Dear xx: Congratulations! I have read the list which is really covered many subjects! I am glad to see that we have something being built up and, as you and your friends are experts on those areas, I just thought if you could shape out some highlight training program which can be exclusive and distinguish yours from other training programs, it will be sparkling on the training market. Well, easier said than done. But I do need some more details or descriptions on those subjects and I know you are working hard on it. Let’s deep down those subjects and see how it goes. I am sure those subjects are plenty enough at the moment! Kind Regards, Shaney

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A letter to someone who is trying to design and build up some training programs

Dear xx:

Congratulations!
I have read the list, which is really covers many subjects!

I am glad to see that we have developed something together being built up and. As you and your friends are experts on those areas, I just thought that if you could shape out some highlight further modify training programs which so that they can be exclusive and distinguished yours from the others training programs, it such programs will be sparkling in the training market.

Well, naturally it is easier to say it than to do it. But (better with: However, or Anyway, ) I do need some more details or descriptions on those subjects, and I know that you are working hard on them (since: those subjects). Let’s deep break down (or: Let's go through more in details on) those subjects and see how it goes. I am sure that those subjects are plenty enough at the moment!

Kind Regards,

Shaney

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Good day. / 祝  是日安好。

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