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Beijing's subway beijing's subway is very crowded. Eveytime when I get off the subway, my body is out of people, my bag is still in the train . if it's a banana in my bag ,when i get off the subway, the banana will become mashed banana. Tomoro I want to eat mashed potato, so I decide to take a potato .

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to mjmcmanus It's a very hard work to get out ,so it must be exciting.
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Hahahaha! Excellent! When the subway gets to your station, it's always exciting trying to get out when there's so many people. "下车吗?"
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The matter in your essay is excellent
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Beijing's subway

Beijing's subway is very crowded.
Every time when I get off the subway, my body is being pushed out of by people, but my bag is still in the train.
if it's there's a banana in my bag, when I get off the subway, the banana will becomea mashed banana.
Tomorrow I want to eat mashed potato, so I decided to take bring a potato.

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