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Do not be sad If you were broken up with your boyfriends,please did not be sad. For he did not love you anymore. There still has your parents who loves you ! If your parents also did not love you,please did not be sad. There still has your grandparents who loves you! If your were grandparents did not love you,please did not be sad. There still has yourself who loves you. Even if all people round you did not love you,did not be sad. you should love yourself! Did not be sad for the people who did not love you! But please did be happy for the people who love you!

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If you broke up with your boyfriends,please do not be sad. 
For he does not love you anymore. 
There still are your parents who loves you !
If your parents don't love you either,please do notbe sad. 
There still are your grandparents who loves you!

If your grandparents don't love you ,please don't be sad
There still you love  yourself .

Even if all people round you do not love you,do  not be sad. 
you should love yourself! 

Do not be sad for the people who don't  love you! 
But please did be happy for the people, who love you.

Mind your grammar mistakes.You should work hard.

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Do not be sad

If you were broken up with (broke up with )your boyfriends,please did not( do not) be sad.
For he did not(does not) love you anymore.
There still has(are) your parents who loves you ! (Your parents still loves you)

If your parents also did not love you(don't love you either),please did not(do not) be sad.
There still has(are) your grandparents who loves you! (----)

If your were grandparents did not love you,please did not be sad. (If your grandparents don't love you ,please don't be sad)
There still has yourself who loves you. (You are still the one who loves u )

Even if all people round(around) you did(do) not love you,did(do ) not be sad.
you should love yourself!

Did not be sad for the people who did not love you! (Do not be sad for those who don't love you"
But please did be happy for the people who love you!(Delete did )

 

 

.....u should work harder on your grammar

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Do not be sad.

If you were have broken up with your boyfriends, please did do not be sad. ,
Ffor he did does not love you anymore.
Tthere still has is still your parents who loves you!

If your parents also did do not love you, please did do not be sad.  ,
Tthere still has is still your grandparents who loves you!

If your were grandparents did do not love you, please did do not be sad. ,
Tthere still has yourself is still you who loves you.

Even if all the people round you did do not love you, did do not be sad. ,
you should love yourself!

Did Do not be sad for because of the people who did do not love you!
But Instead please did be happy for because of the people who love you!

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提醒一下你哦,是there are 不是there is
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So i agree.There is always someone who loves us

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