First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,
I'm 20 years old and girl.   I'm a 20 year old girl.
I love American music.
I want to be able to speak in English.
Please teach me.

Thank you.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi
im 20 years old and girl.
i love american music.
i want to speak in english.
please teach me :)

thank you.

Hi

I am 20 years old, and female.

I love American music.

I want improve my speaking English skills.

Please help me :)

Thank you

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi Hi
im 20 years old and girl. I am 20 YO girl.
i  I love American musics.
i I want to speak in English.
please teach me :) I would very happy if there are some people that want to help improve my English skill (I prefer use this one, :) )

thank you.

So, my version would be like this :

Hi, my name is Emi and I am 20 years old girl. I love American musics and I want to speak English. I would very happy if there are some people who want to help improve my English :). So, anyone? :p

Thank you.

Hi Emi, nice to meet you :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi
im 20 years old and girl.
i love american music.
i want to speak in english.
please teach me :)

thank you.

I am a 20-year-old girl.

I love American music.

I want to speak English.

Please help me