Please cherish the people around you

It has been rainning a lot these days,   I hear that some places in the south of China are suffering flood.   There have been so many disasters all over the world. So many regions were destroyed by so many earthquakes. We can do nothing to stop these nature disasters. Compared with nature's power,  humanity are too weak. Hope everyone cherish their relatives, friends and themslves. If, I mean if, the disaster is coming, we would leave this world without any regrets.

Please cherish the people around you

These days, [there is a lot of rains] it is raining a lot here.   I hear that some places in the south of China are suffering disastrous floods disaster.  There have been so many disasters all over the world.   So many regions were have been destroyed by so many earthquakes. We can do nothing to [stop] prevent these natural disasters. Compared with nature's power, we humans are too weak.    I hope everyone cherish takes care of their relatives, friends and themselves. If, I mean if, the disaster is coming, we would then leave this world without any regrets.

Please cherish the people around you

These days, there is a lot of rains here. I hear that some places in the south of China are suffering flood disaster. There have been so many disasters all over the world. So many regions were destroyed by so many earthquakes. We can do nothing to stop these nature disasters. Compared with nature's power, we humanity are too weak. Hope everyone cherish their relatives, friends and themslves. If, I mean if, the disaster is coming, we would leave this world without any regrets.

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Please cherish the people around you

These days, there is a lot of rains here. I hear that some places in the south of China are suffering flood disaster. There have been so many disasters all over the world. So many regions were destroyed by so many earthquakes. We can do nothing to stop these nature disasters. Compared with nature's power, we humanity are too weak. Hope everyone cherish their relatives, friends and themslves. If, I mean if, the disaster is coming, we would leave this world without any regrets.
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Please cherish the people around you

These days,  it is rainning a lot here.  I hear that some places in the southern part of China are suffering disastrous floods .  There have been so many disasters all over the world. So many regions have been destroyed by so many earthquakes. We can do nothing to prevent  these natural disasters. Compared with nature's power, we humans are too weak.  I hope  everyone take care of  their relatives, friends and themslves. If, I mean if, the disaster is coming, we would then leave this world without any regrets.