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Smoking in public places
Smoking in public places should be banned for these --> the following/many reasons. First of all, smoking has negative effects on not only direct smoker --> not only on the active smoker, but also on the surrounding people. Research indicates that the passive smokers enhale 70% of smoke, only 10% enters the smoker's respiratory system and the remaining 20% stay in air. For instance, if a man smokes 10 cigraretes a day, he will impact 8 others around with effects like him. Furthermore (one word), smoking causes many respirotory --> respiratory diseases. Breathing smoke, you will be coughing and feel stuffy. Specially, smoke í --> Smoke in particular is the main reason for lung cancer. In conclusion, it is advisable that smoking in public places should be abolished.
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