My Grandma
My grandma is a very lovely lady, she likes me very much and i like her too. She's living in Mahenge,Morogoro in a small village called Mzelezi.
She is a farmer. She has a big farm where she cultivates cash crops like sesame, and cereals.
Farming is the main economic activities of people of mzelezi. They send their children to schools because of farming. My grandma likes dancing, traditional dance she never miss it. Thats all about my grandma.
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My Grandma
My grandma is a very lovely lady, she likes (loves?) me very much and I like(love?) her too. She lives in Mahenge,Morogoro in a small village called Mzelezi.
She is a farmer. She has a big farm where she cultivates cash crops like sesame and cereals.
Farming is the main economic activity of people of Mzelezi (or: Farming is the main source of income for the people of Mzelezi). They can ( or: they can afford) to send their children to school because of farming. My grandma likes dancing, she never misses a traditional dance. Thats all about my grandma.
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Thanks sheinarlos, That's what i do Amene
Thanks Ben
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This is very well written, Matt! The only thing I have to add to what Natalia said is that "Thats" should be "That's."
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I love farmers! By the way, treasure your grandma :-)
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your lucky enough to have a grandma..i never experience of that having a grandma on my side..treasure every moment with your grandma..your lucky to have her..
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