A trip
Yesterday, I went to karuizawa, a place which has a good reputation for holiday. it is my first time to get there and is also my first time to drive on the motorway.
Actually the main reason to karuizawa is that I want to practice driving on the motorway. I spent three hours to get there, two hours on the motorway, about 100 kilometres.
I started at 6 o'clock in the early morning and backed at 23 o'clock in the lately evening. There were several traffic jams on the way. I could move centimeter by centimeter in a heavy traffic jam. I arrived there at 9, but then I spent 1 hour for parking.
There is a outlet which includes some famous brands in karuizawa, many people get there just for shopping, sometimes there is a real bargain. especially for time sell, I bought a pair of shoes at 40 percent discount.
I visited some famous spots, ate some local food, and had a SPA.
I had a good day although I was a little tried.
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A Trip
Yesterday, I went to Karuizawa, a place which has a good reputation for holidays. It is my first time to get go there and is also my first time to drive on the motorway.
Actually the main reason to I went to Karuizawa is that I wanted to practice driving on the motorway. I spent three hours to get getting there, two there and two hours on the motorway, - about 100 kilometres kilometers[DWM1].
I started at 6 o'clock in the early [CAM2]morning and came backed at 23 o'clock in the lately evening[DWM3]at night. There were several traffic jams on the way. I could only move centimeter by centimeter in a the[CAM4]heavy traffic jam. I arrived there at 9:00, but then I spent 1 an hour for parking looking for a place to park.
There is an[CAM5] outlet store which includes some famous brands in Karuizawa. Many people get go there just for shopping. Sometimes there is a are real bargains, especially for time sell, they have a sale. I bought a pair of shoes at a 40 percent discount.
I visited some famous spots, ate some local food, and had a SPA went to a spa[CAM6].
I had a good day, although I was a little tried tired.
[DWM1]kilometers is the American spelling, kilometers is the British spelling.
[CAM2]6:00 o’clock is early so you don’t need to say it.
[DWM3]18 to 20 would be considered as evening. Also, most Americans would have no idea what 23 o’clock is. They would say 11:00 p.m.
[CAM4] It was a specific traffic jam; not general.
[CAM5]When the following word begins with a vowel or vowel sound, the article is “an” – not “a”.
[CAM6]Is this what you meant? I never want to change what someone means to say.
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A trip
Yesterday, I went to Karuizawa, a place which has a good reputation for holidays. It was my first time to go there and it was also my first time to drive on the motorway.
Actually, the main reason to go to Karuizawa is, that I want to practice driving on the motorway. It took me spent three hours to get there, two hours on the motorway, about 100 kilometers in total.
I started left at 6 o'clock in the early morning and came backed at 23 o'clock in the lately evening. There were several traffic jams on the way. I could move centimeter by centimeter in one heavy traffic jam. I arrived there at 9, but then I spent 1 hour searching for a good parking spot.
There is an outlet in Karuizawa, which includes sells some famous brands in karuizawa. Many people go there just for shopping. Sometimes there is a real bargain. Especially for time sell, I bought a pair of shoes at with 40 percent discount.
I visited some famous spots, ate some local food, and had a SPA.
I had a good day although I was a little tried.
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