Would anyone check my grammar mistakes？THx a lot.Part 1 It's ok if you don't know Chinese,I just need your help in English.Thx a lot. 翻译红楼梦几乎是不可企及的目标，不仅因为它渗透了中国化的语言文化精髓，也因为它包含着对人生很深的哲学感悟，而且许多思想是通过贯穿全书的上百首诗词歌赋曲折含蓄地表现出来的。我是十几岁的时候第一次读红楼梦的，后来又重温过两遍，始终感觉理解不很透彻。对先生来说，他还面临着贯通两种截然不同的文化和生活方式的挑战。先生明知不可为而为之，他声明自己恪守的一条原则是一切都不放过，包括双关语也要译出来。 To translate "The Dream of Red Mansion" is almost not attainable, because it contained not only the essence of Chinese language culture, but also a deep philosophy of life, and a numerous of thoughts were delivered throughout a hundreds of poetries. I was a teenager when I first read "The Dream of Red Mansion", and renewed several times later, but I always didn't feel that I understood it very well. As for Mr. Hawks, he's even facing the challenges of differences of two cultures and ways of lives. Knowing that translating the masterwork is difficult, he declared himself to abide by a principle of translating everything, including the equivoque. 红楼梦有两条相互联系的叙述主线。一条是凄美动人的爱情故事，描述出身贵族的宝玉同一群美丽动人而命运凄婉、深受封建制度束缚的女子一起成长的经历。第二条是由盛转衰的贵族家族史，折射出18世纪中国社会的变迁。小说的原作者曹雪芹未能完成整部作品，为后人留下了很多无法破解的悬案，至今为学术界所关注和争论，因而还派生出“红学”这个自成体系的研究领域。 "The Dream of Red Mansion" has two interconnected narrative lines. One is the touching love story, describing the life experience of Baoyu and some women's sad fate who were beautiful,moving and under the bondage of feudalism. The other involves the decline and fall of the noble family, and reflects the dramatic social upheavals of 18th-century China.Cao xueqin,the authorship of novel,hadn't finished the whole work, and left much unsolved mysteries which remain a source of interest for academics to this day.That even creates a self-contained research field called "Redology".