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Who can help me?Please!

My dream is to become a movie special effects personnel, Industrial Light and Magic.

--> a movie special effects technician, with a focus on industrial light and magical effects (? not really sure what you mean just by saying magic).

The digital domain these effects production company is the objective of the struggle.

--> The objective of my challenge (instead of struggle) is to work in the digital domain of these effects within the production company.

But my English is very bad!Completely rely on Google Translate! --> I am completely relying on Google Translate  

I want to know some good English friends who can help me?I need your help, please!