Today is my mood
today is good weather, but my mood not good ,because my every day stay in office ,no time enjoy sun ,so my mood is vevy bad.
my job is Graphic design ,every day Facing the computer,for me not happy . is affect my mood and skin . it job keep me for and friends together for the time .so my friends left me , make me every sad . sometimes for me not inspiration mapping , make me lost confidence .I don't know my do job Right or wrong .
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Today is my mood
Today is a good weather , but my mood not good ,because my every day stay in office ,no time enjoy sun ,so my mood is vevy bad.
my job is Graphic design ,every day Facing the computer,for me not happy . is affect my mood and skin . it job keep me for and friends together for the time .so my friends left me , make me every sad . sometimes for me not inspiration mapping , make me lost confidence .I don't know my do job Right or wrong .
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亲,太中文思维了、 天气用 it 还要用过去式。单词也有拼写错。 好好加油, 我也在好好学习中。
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你这篇文章错的有点多,没有按照语法写,完全就是把中文变成英文就完事了
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