Liana's notebook entry: Aug 10, 2010
O! what a pity!!!! I went back from my best friend's home just now. I love to play with her, when we stay together everything is ok! We laughed, talked, ate ice cream and did what we like~~ so happy~~~~. We don't have so many chances to meet, she works and i study. But our friendships iare keeping very good. For us phone is the best transport, ->calls, messages~~~haha!!
Today, i would stay at her home at first we decided. But my parents asked me go back home and tomorrow go on.......Why they weren't allow me to stay at her home??? I am not a child any more!! I do not want to listen to them but have to~~~!!!!_!_!!
Oh! my best friend~~ hope our friendships keep forever!! love you~ :) see you tomorrow~
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Nice essay！
It‘s can be more perfect if you use some of the idioms.
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Liana's notebook entry: Aug 10, 2010
O! what a pity!!!! I went back from my best friend's home just now. I love to play with her, when we stay together everything is ok! We laughed, talked, ate ice cream and did what we like~~ so happy~~~~. We don't have so many chances to meet, she works and i study. But our friendship is keeping very good. For us phone is the best transport, ->calls, messages~~~haha!!Today, i would stay at her home at first we decided. But my parents asked me go back home and tomorrow go on.......Why they weren't allow me to stay at her home??? I am not a child any more!! I do not want to listen to them but have to~~~!!!!_!_!!
Oh! my best friend~~ hope our friendship lasts forever!! love you~ :) see you tomorrow~
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