你好！谢谢你回答我的问题。因为我是美国人，所以我要教你美国人的正常说法，好吧？

你写了：“Tuesday noon we talked about our weekend plan, all of the tutees are willing to share, and when I talked about my plan, I mentioned that I will probably try to solve my new cubes ( rubik’s cube) if its rain outside, and I took out some cubes that I brought with me, tutees then asked me to demonstrate.“

在美国，你可以说“tutees"可是最好少用一点。我是在美国出生长大的。在美国人的对话里，我真的从来没有听说过“tutees"。如果你在写受辅导者的情况，你可以用“tutees"很多。但是美国的导师和老师都平常用“student." 所以，我要把这样的话说："Tuesday afternoon we talked about our weekend plans, and all of the tutees (用一次还可以。现在我们知道这些学生是你的“tutees"了。所以，从现在起，这篇文章最好把“tutees"改成“students.“） “ were willing to share what they have in mind. When I told the students about my plans for the weekend, I mentioned that if the weather is bad, I will probably spend the weekend trying to solve my new Rubik's cubes. And when I took out some cubes that I brought with me, the students asked me to demonstrate."

你写了: "And I found a problem: I can’t solve cubes and chat with tutees students at the same time,"

你写了：“and I still need to prove me solving skills that to reduce the time I need to solve a cube, if I took too much time on it, tutee will get bored before I solve the cube. So far 100 seconds is my limit, but maybe 60 seconds will be better.“

我要把这样的话说：“and I still need to prove my skill in solving the cube. If I take too much time on it, the students will get bored before I am able to finish solving the cube. So far my personal record for solving the cube is 100 seconds. So perhaps if I improve my time to 60 seconds, their attention span won't fizzle out before I solve the cube."

写得很好！继续加油！：）））