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It is all about him My dreams, my tears My smile, my laugh My thoughts, my mood Which make me tough My hurt, my pain That make me scream And each of all my words They all about him, it's all about him

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It is all about him

My dreams, my tears
My smile, my laugh
My thoughts, my mood
Which make me tough
The hurt, my pain
That makes me scream
And each of all my words
They're all about him, it's all about him

 

With poetry reema2008 - you don't "need" to use perfect English, you're free to use the words in any way you like, that's why it's art.

I changed a few things here, because I thought it made it flow smoother, but if you prefer yours, it's not wrong :)

Lucky lad, by the way.

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“Never be sad for what is over, just be glad that it was once yours.” ~Unknown author
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cheer up !
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I just love him...
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Life so long, still meet and converse to who enormously. ya really?

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