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dear mr. Holmes Hello, I’m a big fan of yours for 7 years, since I was 9 years of age. The first adventure that I read was [The Adventure of the Dancing Men]. I discovered the book bound in cloth in secondhand book shop. It seemed too difficult for me at that time, but I was absorbed in reading it in no time. I didn’t have enough pocket money so I haunted the store to read the book. Your way of thinking excited curiosity in myself, and sometimes I tried to know one’s thought/occupation/character in my childhood. Unfortunately soon I realize that I don’t have the talent like you… I’m not good at English but I want to read the original, and I also want to go to 221B someday. Please give my best wish to your assistant Respectfully yours

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dear mr. Holmes

Hello, I’ve been a big fan of yours for 7 years, since I was 9 years old.
The first adventure that I read was [The Adventure of the Dancing Men]. I discovered the book, bound in cloth, in secondhand book shop. It seemed too difficult for me at that time, but I was absorbed in reading it in no time. I didn’t have enough pocket money so I haunted the store to read the book.
Your way of thinking excited my own curiosity, and sometimes when I was a child I tried to know other people’s thoughts/occupation/character. Unfortunately I soon realized that I don’t have the talent like you…
I’m not good at English but I want to read the original, and I also want to go to 221B someday.
Please give my best wishes to your assistant
Respectfully yours

 

http://www.eastoftheweb.com/short-stories/UBooks/AdveDanc.shtml

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Elementary my dear Watson. :))

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