Shirley's notebook entry: Aug 09, 2010
To this days, first day I catch a bad cold and have a fever. my voice is not mine. and then I went to see a doctor.
Second day, I see the doctor again. I have got stomach-ache when I took the medicine. So see the doctor again.
I don't like put on a drip. because it will make me pain.
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Good use of the idiom "catch a cold". I had trouble understanding because of the verbs; you have me flying or diving deep beneath sea regarding the present verses the past. This is crucial information. I recommend getting that dusty old grammar book out and check in. Your vocabulary is good for your level. Continue the good work!
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