it's "throuth", not "trough", right? haha

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because it's the language that I love and because it's very useful today. You all know that without English your access to the trove of information on the internet would be inaccessible and not to mention international business meetings or when you are travelling, can you imagine the possibilities? Why should I lose it all? Life is more beautiful when you are bilingual, isn't it?

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This is really good, you expressed yourself here just like a native speaker would. I have changed some things (mainly word choice) but those things are where a native speaker could be mistaken. I look forward to your future as an English speaker, and I encourage you in the process — and I agree: life is more beautiful when you are billingual :)

Good luck,

Jotraza 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because it's the language that I love and because it's too SO/VERY/THE MOST useful today. You all know that without English your access to the millions WEALTH of information trough THROUGH THE internet would be inaccessible, and not to mention at international meetings of FOR work or when you are travelling. you Can YOU imagine THAT? Why should I lose MISS OUT ON it all? Life is more beautiful when you are bilingual, isn't?

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because it's the language that I love and because it's very useful today. You all know that without English your access to the millions of information trough internet would be inaccessible and not to mention at international meetings of work or when you are travelling, you can imagine? Why should I lose it all? Life is more beautiful when you are bilingual, isn't?