Living with Roommates Is Better

Nowadays, all of the college students have been are arranged to live with roommates since they are freshmen during their first year. But However,guadually, some of them cannot adjust to their life in a dormistory.So they These individuals choose to move outside and live independently. However, most of college students consider that living with roommates is better.

Firstly, students who are living together will not always will not feel lonely. If students live with the roommates, they can communicate with their roommates quite often and roomates can share the hapiness or something happy, interesting, or sadness with them students always will to not feel lonely. In contrast, students living independently cannot be easily to find someone talk to them to speak with face to face.

Secondly, students can get more help when they're among roommates. Sometimes, students may have some accidents in the dormistory such as cutting their finger by the knife, falling down, and hurt the back or legs and so on. If the students live with roommates, they can get the help they need and be taken care of by their roommates. If not, it is difficult for them to get the help.

Thirdly, living with roommates is safer. In case the a students goes out of the dormistory without locking the door.If the students live with roomates, their roommates can watch the door and lock it. In contrast, if living independently, a the thief may rush into the house and steal something.

All in all, living with roomates is better.

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Common mistakes:

Mispellings

> Dormitory

> Roommates

Grammar

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Translation

> 他们跟他们的室友交流 - They can communicate with their roommates.

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