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Nightmare journey My nightmare journey was 5 years ago.My friend and i were going to go to a wedding party of our common friend. At first we went to a hair designer and then we went to my house and change our dresses. My friend bought a new car but it was a second hand . When we were not far from the party place , her car wheels became puncture and we didnt know how could we change the wheel , even we knew ,we didnt do that because of tight dress that we were wearing. We phoned the several times to our friends at that party,but they didnt answer. Finally , we decided to abandon the car and toke a taxi,but unfortunately that place was far from the city so it wasnt a taxi route. we had been there for 40 minoutes and then we saw the car of other guests and they helped us to change the wheel.

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A Nightmare Journey

 

My nightmare journey happened five years ago. My friend and I were preparing to go to the wedding party of a mutual friend.


At First, we went to a hairdresser and then we went to my house and changed into our dresses.

 

My friend had bought a new car, but it was a second-hand.


When we were not far from the party place reception hall, one of her car wheels got a puncture and we didn't know how we could change the wheel, even though  we did know; we didn't want to do so because of the tight dresses that we were wearing.


We phoned our friends at the party the several times to our friends at that party, but they didn't answer.


In the end, we decided to abandon the car and take a taxi, but unfortunately that place the hall was far from the city so it and therefore wasn't a taxi route.


We had been waited there for forty minutes, and then we saw the car of some other guests, and they who helped us to change the wheel.

 

Hope the corrections are clear enough. 

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