First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I learn English to cooperate with foreign company in my work and to learn a technical documents about petroleum equipment. In the future I'm going to work In foreign well drilling or drilling service companies. Also I like to read and I would read English literature, magazines and newspapers. I would be happy if you help me improve my English. Thanks.
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I would say: "I learn English to cooperate with foreign company at work"
I am confused with what you are trying to say here: "and to learn a technical documents about petroleum equipment." Please clarify.
"In the future I'm going to work in foreign well drilling or drilling service companies."
Because you are changing topics radically with the rest of your text, i would suggest a different transition, such as: "When I am not at work, I like to read and I would like/love to read English literature, magazines and newspapers. I would be happy if you could help me improve my English. Thanks."
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When I wrote this note I hoped that one day I would work in a foreign company. And so, after 6 years as I made this note, I started working for a foreign company.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I learn English to cooperate with foreign company in my work and to learn a technical documents about petroleum equipment. In the future I'm going to work In foreign well drilling or drilling service companies. Also I like to read a lot and I would want to read English literature, magazines and newspapers. I would be happy if you help me improve my English. Thanks.
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