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Mr. GIRI I have a friend named Giri!!! he is one of the funny boy in our hostel.he is famous for lamba!!!!! His hight is 6'0 fit. but his brain like a boy of 6 years. he can't run fast! it is a very funny moment when he use to run! his voice like a broken bamboo!!!!!! But including all this he is my very good friend!!!!!!

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Mr. GIRI Giri

I have a friend named Giri!!! h He is one of the 'funny boys' in our hostel. h He is famous for lamba!!!!! His height is 6'0 fit. , but his brain is like a boy of 6 years. h He can't run very fast! i It is a very funny moment when he use tries to run! h His voice is like a broken breaking bamboo!!!!!! But including Inspite of all of this he is my very good friend!!!!!!

 

One exclimation point (!) is enough to show that you are excited. Alway capitalize (h=H) after a period (.) - at the beginning of a new sentence.

'Inspite' has been used to replace 'But including...' to mean that you do not care about Mr. Giri's faults and that you like him anyway (you may also use 'Regardless'

Kind Regards,

CF

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